Review by Jaylen

Student Critic: Jaylen R
School: Wadsworth
School Teacher: Aldina Loggins
Performance: Poetry Festival
Teaching Artist: Preston Thomas

Introduction:

The performance was at the logan center April5th 2017 and the preformance was about poretrey.


Critique:

The performance was boring to me because pepole were saying poems over and over agian and i was hot. I didnt understand anything they were talking about.




Conclusion, The Takeaway:

The preformance was succesful  because many pepole liked the preformance but i did not because itwas boring to me pepole saying poems over again. I liked one part was when they were singing and dancing.


One Reply to “Review by Jaylen”

  1. -Expand your INTRODUCTION to share a bit more about the poetry festival. Who performed? What were the poems about? What did it look like, sound like and feel like to you?
    -Make sure you use spell-check and proofread your writing so it is more clear.
    -You write in your CONCLUSION about a part you liked. Describe that performance in detail in your CRITIQUE paragraph.
    ★★★

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