Poetry Festival

Student Critic: Morgan G
School: Wadsworth
School Teacher: Aldina Loggins
Performance: Poetry Festival
Teaching Artist: Preston Thomas

Introduction:

hello my name is morgan gilliard today you will be reading the most greatest critique in the world .


Critique:

for starters i want to give a hand to Emily Lansana for doing her thing okay back to the performance this performance was a ball of emotions for example the little boy he didnt really perform as good as otheres but better to do it then to not . This little boy had a sad poem i liked it because he let his feelings and it was inspiring all the performances was inspiring .




Conclusion, The Takeaway:

maybe i will be performing the next time we go.


One Reply to “Poetry Festival”

  1. -Include details about the performance in your INTRODUCTION.
    -SHOW us a great critique, which is more effective and convincing.
    -Make sure you use spell-check and proofread your writing so it is more clear.
    -Use more details and be more specific in your CRITIQUE. Remember, you are writing this for readers who were not at the performance.
    -That is wonderful that you might perform next time! Add more thoughts about this in your CONCLUSION.
    ★★★

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