Powerful

Student Critic: Brandon S.
School: Wadsworth
School Teacher: Aldina Loggins
Performance: Poetry Festival
Teaching Artist: Preston Thomas

Introduction:

At the Logan Center there was some powerful kid that went on to the stage that talked about their life and what happened in thier life.

 


Critique:

And  some kids use A beat to A song that whent just right to thier poam. And also the beat was powerful.




Conclusion, The Takeaway:

Add more details to your INTRO and CRITIQUE and then write your CONCLUSION.


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